Looking good, I may have you add in/change one of your weaknesses to something that is more prominent - unless you have a good reason for them all, so I know that they aren't just something that you control, and can switch on and off at will.

Though [b]Between Two Worlds[/b] could turn out to be good enough.

Make sure, when you finish, you put it in the Character Depo, easier for me to keep track of them.