I wrote a few quick-comments about everyone’s posts so far. They are purely subjective, but I thought that they might give some positive vibes.

[b]Ozerath[/b]
The “Jyn and Tonic” gag was hysterical. Thael would probably know Britney Farron somehow, considering that he is the captain of the football team and she is the head cheerleader.

[b]Tenish[/b]
The post reminded me of the Hunger Games, the second installment, when Katniss is practicing against holographic targets. Not sure why this popped up in my head, since I’m not a fan of the hunger games, even though I’ve seen the films.

Perhaps you would like to elaborate on “B.A.S.I.L.I.S.K.” with a synopsis paragraph in a Codex entry?—purely optional, of course.

[b]Sixsmith & Adora[/b]
This bro-force thing that is going on is quite humorous—a clever character device.

[b]Insatiable[/b]
The ringtone was a nice touch, made me chuckle. 

Good innovation on ‘Herlen University.’ Any thoughts on where it might be located?—City-State, town, somewhere else? What makes it well-renowned and prestigious? If you want to, you can write a synopsis paragraph about Herlen University for the Codex.

[b]JJ Doe[/b]
I chuckled more than once in regards to Kim’s Samba hallucination. The whole post reminded me of an episode of Family Guy in which Brian pops mushrooms and has himself a trippy ride.

[b]Blackwell[/b]
I’m a sucker for conciseness and clean prose, this post had both and it was an utter delight to read.