First of all drallinx. I just want to remind you that this is casual, so I'd like to remind you to use capitals or at least try to use them where appropriate (Name:, Age: etc.)

Now onto your history. I'll break it down to point out the main concerns I have.

[quote=Dralinnx]
history: He never knew his parents or his home planet, but when he was a child his master found him to be force sensitive and brought him before the council, they agreed to let her raise and train him.[/quote]

Knowing your parents isn't really a major issue, however you would not be raised by one master. You would be part of one of the clans that younglings form and live with switching between many different teachers. One of the reasons for this is so that attachments aren't formed and people do not gain father or mother figures.

[quote=Drallinx] When he went into the caves to find a crystal he was in tune with(on his masters orders) he found rare crystals of pure silver. While rare this was not unheard of and he was allowed to use these crystals to make his blades. Modeling his first lightsaber off of his masters in an almost exact copy except with a longer hilt and the second was purely of his own design.[/quote]

Upon becoming a Padawan you would not instantly construct two lightsabers. [i]Why?[/i] Because you would not know any lightsaber form capable of wielding two lightsabers. 

 [quote=Drallinx]Adrian was a jedi padawan and fought with his master alongside clones. They had been to many planets and fought on many fields sometimes with other jedi and sometimes they battled alone fighting alongside one another and fueling off one another. [/quote] 

An example mission wouldn't go amiss here. You don't need to write an AAR but it would help.

[quote=Drallinx]When order 66 was given his master sensed it and pushed him off a cliff into an ocean, but died defending her padawan. [/quote]

Very few Jedi managed to sense it however as she was pushing you off a cliff not doing anything major I will allow that. However don't go sensing everything.

[quote=Drallinx]Adrian infiltrated the clone base in the dead of night and stole a small ship[/quote]

A little more on this. You were just pushed off a cliff. How did you survive?

I want you to think for a moment. Whether or not you believe you know enough on the franchise. If you don't you can go for an even younger player and actually learn IC or you can hop on the IRC or start a PM conversation with myself and we'll help you out. However at this rate I'm coming close to outflat denying you and I just want you to know that.