[quote=Closet Nerd]
IOptimist: Just a minor problem with the appearances, it seems like you copypasted those on either side of the CS, Fantasy and Reality generally look different from one another. Plus that means Storm is mentioned on Gail's side. I'm not accepting it yet since it's late and I might not have caught something potentially questionable but it looks good. Plus mentioning that the protagonist has a bisexual aunt, a gay uncle (or father, maybe) and a gay character on the way from Rune, it seems like we're already building a setting here I think. Also Pennsylvania xD
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She can still be a member of a British family, if you wish. I could easily change where she grew up, without changing the character in any significant way. I am used to Philadelphia, Kansas City, Orlando and Kansas City, having lived in each of those cities. Would you prefer one of them? If not, I know the feel of London, because I watch way to much British television. I have also been to Colorado, Canada, California and Texas, if that helps, though I never lived in those places. (I assume your British, from your spelling of the word color, but I could be wrong on that.)

I fixed up the appearance, making them quite different. I hope that this helps.