[quote=Jangel13]
okay, I got your message and I understand. with the next few posts ill make sure to work on it as best I can. I didn't mean I would attack her I mean that since she was patrolling Tortuga she would try to stop me or something was all that I meant
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It's all good ;D as long as you understand what you have to work on and I can see you trying, you're fine. Nothing better than learning how to have even more fun :P
Anyway, as I said earlier, I won't be here this week so I won't be able to give you feedback on what you do post, but when I come back I will be sure to, so impress me ;)
Have fun everyone, and if new people show interest, tell them to PM me their CS's and I'll look over them when I return. 

Hasta la vista!