[quote=Closet Nerd] Optimist: Thanks for the update there. No need to change the setting, I'm glad you included one actually. Abigail is accepted! Also I'm not English, I just think colour looks correct phonetically. And it's fancy xDToaw: Yeah, it'd be 2014. I don't really see much of a reason to go back or forward since it'd likely be a maximum of a two decade difference. I'm curious about Joseph's age though. If he had a child whilst in the navy I'd assume he had that child in his twenties. I just want to know how old do you think the protagonist was when he died? Another question is are you going to use that narrator thing as a pirate? It'd be cool to have a pirate narrator simply because it's delightfully unfitting. No sarcasm. I don't see much reason to hold him back though, he's really fleshed out and clearly well thought out so Joseph is accepted! And yes, I must always have an exclamation point when a character is accepted. [/quote] I would say that he has been dead for a few years, and you are correct that he had a child in his twenties, or even early thirties I just didn't want to stump anyone who would want to play the mother, and to limit them that much. I'm a very conservative person when it comes to these things, but I should probably go back and mention that he has been deceased for the past few years in my CS? No? Either way thank you, I wasn't entirely sure about him towards the end, at least during the Bio. As for the narrator part I don't know, I was more or less thinking about abandoning the idea, and playing as someone who she meets a long the way, in some random or crazy encounter. Maybe I'm the first person she meets, and I whisk her away on the start of her new adventure? Either way I've typed a lot, and I don't like typing a lot when I'm not writing an awesome story, and RP stuff so I think I'm going to stop now XD. Also one last thing, are we going to be able to have our own little world of sort that she stumbles onto. Considering that the characters are so different I think it would fit the story. Maybe as she travels through these worlds she brings these characters along as the big bad destroys their worlds slowly one by one. (I know it is a bit cliche, but hey why not). Ok so I'm really done now I promise. Unless I think of something...nope ok you're good. Edit: I'm pretty sure there is plenty of room :D