how is this?

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~Ignore the Lucario for now, he will come later in a trade :3~

Name: Mai 
Age: 17
Starter: Chimchar
Personality: Mai is outgoing and charming. She loves to take risks and tends to be a bit reckless sometimes. A very loyal friend, she can be counted on to pull through with anything. Dosent give up easily and is really hard to upset. She usually starts a conversation with a happy, "Hey! Whats doing? I'm Mai. Lets hang."
Dream: To become a Gym Leader or member of the Elite Four with her awesome team of Fighting type pokemon!