[quote=Mizuho]
So, how far would I be able to broaden my character's magic? What I personally had in mind was I'd begin with the weaker powers, and with each tier, I would introduce an ability that it different, yet a bit more powerful. 

Would something like: ...

be acceptable?Or would you rather have me focus on a few abilities and work on making them stronger as my character progresses?
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See those powers are fine, just scrunch them together and judge your abilities based off of their power.

With multiple powers like that you aren't necessarily focusing on one specific ability, so I think it would be alright for your tier to be like this:

Tier 1: Minor persuasion and healing abilities. Influence minor emotions and heal small cuts.
Tier 2: Distortion screaming, throws enemies off guard. (This will be your "Fight" tier) 
Tier 3: Improved screaming, more painful to hostile beings. Weaker enemies are stunned.
Tier 4: More advanced persuasion and healing techniques. Influence lesser minds with decision making, even convince them to fight along side you. Heal open wounds.

An ability like Hallucinations, might be placed higher on the list, however I'm not sure where I want the cap to be. I'm debating making it ten, yet I'm still unsure how I would want the leveling system to work in the first place. Please bear with me here ^_^' !

[quote=ShadowRaeper]
Thanks for the tip :) I didn't really knew how you truelly wanted it, so now i can create it into a CS you wanted :)For my english... sorry... It isn't my main languedge...
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No problem, sorry for being a bit harsh there are just a stricter set of standards for me in an advanced RP. I can look past the misspellings if they are minor, however please address more specifically on some of the elements I went into. I look forward to seeing an updated character sheet from you :)