Wow, the quote system doesn't keep paragraph spacing? o.0 [quote=Windreda] One thing I have to step in on for a lot of people is Atlas residents didn't have this magic in the past. It only JUST now resurfaced, so getting kicked out of Atlas because of magic would only work if it takes place within recent events. Also because of Atlas's strong fear of magic you wouldn't be kicked out, but still working out the kinks and details. Might turn the scientists of Atlas into major immoral D-bags, might turn The Sky Brigade into kill on sight kind of people. Still deciding how I would like tings to turn out. [/quote] Well by kicked out I meant by his family, I haven't really worked out all the kinks to the backstory but I was thinking she would be a part of a noble's family, seen experimenting with magic by a family members, and snuck into being a "Surveyor" as a pseudo form of exile to keep her away from the city for both her own safety and her family's. Also thinking of having fire based magic to up the freak out factor, you know relation to the great fire n stuff. If this is sounds too much for magic thats been recently discovered, maybe I can turn it into a subplot in the RP instead? Start as a noble and turn my character to the life os surveying during the plot.