[quote=thatguy]
Character You Wish To Play: Bob Reynolds, The Sentry
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I'm sorry man. You've got a few very interesting ideas but your writing isn't at the level that I would be happy accepting this. You clearly haven't proofread, so it's unlikely you will in posts if accepted. It's far too brief to give a clear enough picture of the past of such a powerful character; your application ends just as he has gained his superpowers . What has he been doing since? What actions lead up to his encounter with the Avengers and what has he been doing for the year following? The powers could also have used some tweaking to make this a character who can be collaborated with. 

All in all, I'm going to have to reject your app. Feel free to reapply for the character at a later date with the changes taken on board, or attempt another character.