I wonder. . . . .Does Erik notice how he talks to Joseph? I know, I know, I know, I'm kind assuming things here, but the feel I got. . . .Erik, talks to him almost like the slave he is. He even gives him an order at one point. Just the feeling I got, and I actually quite find that fascinating. I can't wait to see where that goes :P Also, at one point you wrote Erik where a Joseph went and that mix up gave Erik scissors, which made me laugh :P I think you did well, I liked it :P