[quote=gcold]
Alright sovi3t, just a few things I've noticed.-Who is the leader right now? Jartod or Jorjolfr Oath-Smith?-You mentioned the Mages Guild. The Guild was disbanded during the end of Oblivion Crisis. I would change it to something like the College of Winterhold.-The Vigilants were essentially wiped out in the events of , Isran and his buddies (assuming that's the side you take) will filling the same role. That's pretty much yet for now. Let me know if you have any more questions.
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Alright, edited 

Jartod is leader, forgot to hchange Jorjolfr out 
Swapped College of Winterhold in 
Dawnguard replace Vigilants of Skyrim