[quote=gcold]
Alright sovi3t, just a few things I've noticed.-Who is the leader right now? Jartod or Jorjolfr Oath-Smith?-You mentioned the Mages Guild. The Guild was disbanded during the end of Oblivion Crisis. I would change it to something like the College of Winterhold.-The Vigilants were essentially wiped out in the events of , Isran and his buddies (assuming that's the side you take) will filling the same role. That's pretty much yet for now. Let me know if you have any more questions.
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If I may speak up, good sir:

You have quite the army there. I do have a discretion with the amounts of men and women serving in your vast military on account of Skyrim not being a very metropolitan place and therefore not able to sustain a very large standing army. Even High Rock doesn't have that large of an army. I like to refer to A Song of Ice and Fire when trying to figure out how large the armies should be. Now, taking into account the size of the army that the North managed to muster during their uprising, which was 20,000 strong, it would be very reasonable for Skyrim- with its similar climate and geography in most parts- to have a standing army around this size. Your corps of veterans would make for an intimidating standing army on its own by our own history's standards.

Do feel free to try to refute me on these points.