[quote=Blackwell] I always have trouble discerning between rambling and good description. I'm not a fan of flowery language myself, so I tend to keep my stuff short and to the point. I could try to embellish things a bit, if that'd make it more enjoyable to read. :) [/quote] That's alright. Don't force anything. I've found, however, that filling the gaps with character's thoughts is a decent way to develop things—how they reflect on things—which is usually best conveyed in the first person. @Everyone, I don't want you to get stressed out by the seven day-deadline—the 'autopilot' is there for a reason—but you should definitely strive towards posting once every seven days. Also, has anyone heard anything from Tenish? Everyone has made a second post and been active in the ooc except Tenish. I haven't received any private messages from him either. Remi will autopilot with everyone else for now, until we hear something.