hmm, a few things.

For the Fallen's Eyes KG, I'm not sure why they need to be able to see chakra networks. I'm seeing that a bit too much often, which is weird since it's meant to be something monopolized by the Hyuga clan.

Hornet Style: Decapitating Scissor. You mentioned ice here, did you mean water? Since I'm pretty sure ice is something that can only be made through a certain KG.

Plasma Release: Asteroid. Some of the wording confused me here. "A concussion blast is released from Remi smashing two Plasma Release: Asteroid jutsus together." I don't really know what even one of these jutsu does, so it's quite hard to get a grasp of it's effect.