Well, if that's gonna cause a confusion with you then it'd likely cause some confusion in a few other people too. Can't have that when we need things to run smoothly. I guess I'll fix that part of the CS for the real deal.

Do you guys have any suggestions for both the backstory and CS?

Moreover, I take it that that CS of yours is far from complete? Considering that I haven't even really posted an interest check. Do note that vocation does not refer to weapons that your character could use. It refers to the 'job' your character had before UNXIPU. For example, artillery operator or marine sniper.