Didos: Looks good so far just two quick little things. First even if you do not use Magic, you are still born with a natural affinity (kinda comes in story wise later) so if you wouldn't mind adding one. And then second I would like to have a little more background with your time with the Ironwolves, (unless you just joined and if that is the case then you are good)

BKburke: Again looks good, same two comments as Didos if you could fix those then I would be fine. As for the demonish look and all that, I'm guessing that has something to do with the character, I don't mind, but I ask that you shoot me a pm explaining it so i can try to fit in any events or something to build story on your character.

Also just a little pop in, lets not have everyone be fresh recruits please. Also eveyone's bio doesn't have to have them moving to join, you can be recruited out in the field if you make an impression on some captain of the Wolves.