You're a 16 year old Jonin with one of the most powerful versions of the Uchiha bloodline, and I don't even really get what happened for him to get it because you just glanced over that part as if it didn't matter. Those are my only suggestions to work on but my opinion doesn't really count here, so go ahead and ignore me. I do want to know what happened there though, he just kinda left on a mission and came back sad from where I'm sitting.