[quote=Asuras]
The consistent grammatical errors also raise alarms.
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Ya I already know since I was in rush to get in this quick. Spacing, fragments that needs revising and spell error and will fix that later. Just want to get this in and stop holding up your time for this to start.

Anyway I will get to fixing the semblance aspect and rework it. One thing that will stay is the wings.

EDIT: Got the zerochan link working and the semblance has only been reduced to wings. Could not work out the fear, dread and terror ability of Martis Ira. Removed thermal vision.