[quote=Seraph]
Okay I toned down the abilities but I wanted to keep its base concept, I added specifics for the blood sacrifice and increased the time between necessary sacrifices from every five minutes to every minute now. We cool?
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 "He allows its power to speak for itself, for it is a blade that can cut any material with enough speed and force, including chakra-based defenses. While most objects can be cleaved through like warm butter, metals and harder substances of the like will require multiple strikes in order to sever, though this sword's cutting potential is well beyond average."

Uneasy. You're trying though. Keep in mind that no matter how you word something, it's got to be backed up, so cutting through chakra should take chakra of equal or greater amount to perform, not just using the blades natural form as an excuse. That's my biggest worry.

I'm tentative on the issue and I'll need to speak to Pierce closely, but know that if you're accepted we're keeping an eye on what goes on in these fights and how hard people work to undermine each other. Not just you, but everyone. Again, any concerns and questions can be brought to the PM's if there's anything you'd like to discuss with us.

You hear that Pierce? Wait. -_-