[quote=Mammalia]
I plan out everything. Man vs. X is just so I can categorise the conflicts my characters have.Also I need critique because I don't have anyone else to get it frooooomAlso I don't care everybrony ever will like Gilda now muahahaha
[/quote]

I'll help after I finish swimming here. Although planning just takes up sooooo muuuuuch tiiiiiiime.