I just finished reading the other CS's and i realized that me and Killer Queen have nearly identical characters. I'll go make some edits.

If it won't work to have similar characters like that I think I can come up with a new one.

-EDIT-

I made some changes that should hopefully make him different enough, plus I made him younger so he's more inexperienced, I also took out some of the distinct places since I didn't know if most of the story took place in the US or somewhere else.