[quote=The Gingerbread Man] The spindly thing is intentional. I mean for her to be both intelligent and athletic but still be a realistic member of the B-Team. Thus my original thought on that was 'she did it out of boredom'. I made it a bit more sad than that though. She joined up during a very damaged mental state that was elongated by locking herself away from everyone else so really, it's meant to not make sense. I mean, try locking yourself away with nothing but some random paintings and abstract sculptures for four years and see how sound your decision making skills become. I also believe that she can realistically stay with the B-Team seeing as how that is the way she reintegrates herself into society. Even though I am being a bit defensive about it, I would definitely be willing to make some minor changes to it to have it be more believable if you are willing to help me out in some small way. I'm a bit exhausted from writing that much so my brain has sort of melted.EDIT: Also thanks for complimenting the shield thing, I enjoyed the idea myself ^^ [/quote] Well my worry was precisely that such a weak reason for joining wouldn't have seen her through the academy years. Perhaps if she did it for some hollow sensation of heroics? I've known people to perform philanthropically for their own benefit as opposed to that of others. If you're happy with that biography, though, I'm sure I'll get over it.