Y - lovely start on your elf. Let me know when she's completed and I'll return to her.

Bane - Great job on your guy too. You owe me strengths, weapons, additional info and his weakness via PM I believe. :)

Nobody - Good job. The armor is perfectly fine. Give me a little more on his background, tell me of his raising and a little more of a look inside who he is and why. Also - show me a little more of the country/city that he is from so I can see it and visualize that's around us. Other than that - looks great. Let me know when it's updated and I'll re-read and give you a thumbs up. Glad you joined. :)