[quote=Mammalia]
Oh, also, do you have any more critique on the synopses? Anything about the characters that doesn't feel right? Does anything seem flat? I'm particularly worried about Smee's motivation; there's not really much to do for laughter.
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Well I feel that having each of them be the only one in their village that isn't somehow the exact opposite of the element that this one being represents is a little bit... Off. Maybe it would work once, but having "the only truth teller in a tribe of liars" and then "the only one to overcome/not behave like that" makes it seem predestined. Or the whole fact of them having to overcome the opposite of their element, if that makes any sense.