@Axleonex: I've seen thos epics in your crossover and I think they look really cool. It's nice to see some Fett thrown into the mix.

And thanks for the feedback, I'll incorporate some of them if I can. Not sure if I like the idea of Bill being a formal war officer though. But I do like the fact that he's almost ten years older than they are. It makes me consider a 'father-son' relationship that Bill and John once shared. Perhaps Bill does something that wrongs John, but John is unable to kill this 'father-figure' and flees instead. Enter Lillie, and John vows to help her take her revenge against Bill.

I was thinking that maybe John kidnaps Lillie for some reason. Do you watch Game of Thrones? If not, stop reading cause there's spoilers ahead. I don't want to rip it off, but The Hound sort of kidnaps Arya Stark; she doesn't mind it though. I was thinking that maybe John kidnaps Lillie, but Lillie doesn't care because she hates the way she lives anyway (abusive parents? Hateful foster home?). Throughout the course of the story the two develop that father-daughter relationship they both sorely need.

I keep imagining these scenes in my head. In one scene, John is working with Bill partway through the story, and I really like that, but I ain't sure how to handle it; it just won't fit. The other scene has an upset Lillie begging John to help her, so John just puts his hand on her shoulder and reassures her: "Okay, girl... I'll help you get what you want..."