[quote=LegendBegins] Done.Blaaaarrrrgg. [/quote] Yoy. About this: "I would really recommend making sure the pain behind Scootaloo’s need for revenge is astronomical, to drive it to the point of wanting to kill Guilda for it. That’ll need a lot of detail to be convincing. Most of all, make sure that the plot isn’t repetitive (ie >Go to village >Overcome anti-element >New group member realizes element)." Scootaloo: Scootaloo trusts Rainbow Dash very, very much. Rainbow Dash promised Scootaloo that when she was gone, Scootaloo would get Loyalty. Scootaloo feels like Gilda broke Dash's promise and her loyalty, and then there's that foalish greed driving it. Although, if it makes it more believable, I can do this: Scootaloo scoots up to where Gilda is going where the remains of the elements are. Gilda gets there before her and picks up the pendant. She is about to put it on when Scootaloo gets there and calls for her to stop because it's supposed to be hers, but Gilda (being Gilda) just sneers and puts it on. Scootaloo is devastated when the element shines and Gilda is shown as the true bearer, and once Gilda defeats Discord she can gloat a bit. Repetitive plot: The way it goes down is actually quite different. Dak (what I've chosen for Daacad) will think that Gilda getting to know him was just one big lie and will throw the element at her before running off. Gilda will have to nudge him toward doing the right thing and being honest about the terrible secret his friend entrusted to him, thus saving the tribe, and she'll have to get him the element just as he tells the truth. Sera (Seraphim, what I've chosen for Udāratā) will accept the element even though nothing happens, because she wouldn't think of it as something mean. The only thing that the two of them can think of to cause Sera to have to overcome her anti-element will be getting Sera to hate Gilda and then having Sera save Gilda. Kang (Temp for Kangkai) will accept the element, but won't wear it, so Gilda and friends have to somehow find the element in his home behind his back and get him to wear it just as he gives away all his long-earned money. Smee won't accept it because he thinks that it'll be useless, since penguins don't think of accessories as useful and the only use they have for gems is for their magic. Gilda and friends have to figure out how to get it to work the same way as Smee's crystal, and they won't be able to think of something to get Smee to overcome his anti-element. That actually happens naturally, and they only figure out that the element was [i]already[/i] tuned to work like Smee's crystal just in time to get it on him as he saves the suicidal penguin. Veninde will accept it like Sera did and there won't need to be any fancy business, although Gilda will take a while to realise that it's supposed to be friendship guiding her and not magic. Commentary: Explain how a “daymare” could occur: It's basically a daydream, but it's involuntary like a nightmare. It'd strike her like a vision (because they basically [i]are[/i] visions) in the middle of the battle and change her sight to that of the scene in the dream, causing her to nearly get killed.