[quote=Tachi]I think a kitsune would be a youkai, not a kami. [/Quote]
Brainfart, it happens. Changed it.

[quote=Tachi]And, more out of curiosity than anything, why are a Japanese spirit's ability names German? [/Quote]
It's imaginative. It's an Anime thing. It seemed fun. It gives a twist. She's a weirdo. Pick one.

[Quote=Tachi]As for actual issues, I'm a bit confused as to why you didn't use the character sheet in the OP (although as far as I can tell, the only things you haven't got equivalents for here are the optional backstory field and clubs, which I guess could just be a sign that the character's not in any?).[/Quote]
Doing my own thing. Writing CS in my order and leaving it. Being creative. Not expecting the GM to nitpick on my choices as long as I deliver. If he was in a club I'd have said so. Pick one.

[Quote=Tachi]I'm afraid that "can bend light to her will" is a bit too vague for me to accept, since while that could just mean bending light to create illusions, it could also mean the opponent's now in a tiny sphere full of laser-y death.[/Quote]

[Quote= Enigma]While within [I]Raum[/I], Kojoro can bend light to her will. At it’s simplest, she can let her enemy see whatever she wants them to see while inside the sphere.[/Quote]
Why would I let an illusionist character be able to shoot lasers...?

[Quote=Tachi]Also, 10-15 minutes...is actually quite a long time. I'd be surprised if a fight lasts more than 5-10 in-character and...honestly, I'd generally put 8-10 as a limit on how long a summon can go all out without needing to return to the other world.[/Quote]
Now that I have something to base it on since you did not specify in your OP, I changed it accordingly.

[Quote=Tachi]Also, are Raum and Trick based on anything kitsune are known for? I mean, I know they do illusions, but I'm curious as to whether or not there's more behind Raum's execution.[/quote]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kitsune

[I]"Other supernatural abilities commonly attributed to the kitsune include possession, mouths or tails that generate fire or lightning (known as kitsunebi), willful manifestation in the dreams of others, flight, invisibility, and the creation of illusions so elaborate as to be almost indistinguishable from reality.[14][18] Some tales speak of kitsune with even greater powers, able to bend time and space, drive people mad, or take fantastic shapes such as a tree of incredible height or a second moon in the sky.[22][23] Other kitsune have characteristics reminiscent of vampires or succubi and feed on the life or spirit of human beings, generally through sexual contact.[24]"[/I]

Took it as a baseline, added my own thing. Watched one piece and liked Trafalger Law's room.

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Now for my own two cents. I don't mind a GM expecting something from his players. I like RPs that are above average. But holy SHIT are you nitpicky. My CS is good. At the very least, it's OK. There was absolutely no need to go over it in the fashion you did. Your rant made me almost wanting to throw the towel for this RP. And most importantly if you take it on yourself and invest this much time to annoy the lights out of your players because their CS doesn't fit 100% what you had in mind then I take the liberty of expecting you to deliver something on your part. After I uploaded my CS I had a look at the IC and your opening post. I was less than impressed. 

It's one thing to point out one or to no-nos in your players' CS. That's the right of a GM. But it's a whole other story to turn every stone and every breadcrumb for whatever reasons you may have.

/Rant. That said, if you'll still have my character I'm still in. I just don't enjoy being needlessly criticized.