Yep, gimme me a day or less to rework or review it, thanks for the constructive criticism, it's gonna help alot in the review. Thanks for your time, mate. Edit: For the power, he really doesn't enchant it, and can only surround it with it, atleast to the point where it helps it cut a bit better, though keep in mind, Jack can't control his powers all to well, as no one could've taught him that (Not even the mentor) Speaking of the mentor, I'd probably have to give a backstory to him or a name atleast huh. For the weapon, I sincerely didn't know (mostly) everyone started with that, just though my character would go well with it, I guess. Damn back to the drawing board Also, mind giving me a heads up for a weapon, thinking of a gauntlet like weapon, which helps him manipulate wind better(?) or I might go with Gun Kata. Hm Note: Character sheet has been edited, see if it fits more OP.