[quote=mattmanganon]
Alright, I updated my CS, I was hoping to still use the Bexley Clan faction, mainly because it could add in some needed villains if necessary, hers is not the only dimension in her universe to have developed the Dimension-Destabilization-Projector. I have a few good villains, birthed from evil versions of herself, to bring in as need be.[/quote]
 
Hm... Looking at my previous judgement, my only complaint was that an army comprised of nothing but the same person over and over again seems a little... off. Everything else checks out. So, I think I can try something. Kyzan and the Bexley Clan are [b]accepted[/b], though if any problems are brought up to my attention, I'll review the sheet with the problems in mind and either shoot you a PM or discuss in the OOC thread.
 
Rikka is [b]accepted[/b].
 
As for Jareth.
 
Oh.
 
My.
 
God.
 
When I saw this sheet, that were my reaction. Although I have not seen the movie proper, I have heard of Labyrinth through reviews, and the awesomeness of Jareth through stories and the late Justin Carmichael's portrayal of him in [i]Suburban Knights[/i]. The only thing I think should be changed is Wicked Tongue. Not in the sense that it should be nerfed, but in the sense that Jareth's manipulative tongue is probably more for a personality trait than a downright power. It also reads a little close (to me) to Mind Control, but again, it could just chalk up to manipulation for all I know.
 
Your chances of acceptance are high (90%), it's just I need this Wicked Tongue thing either explained to justify it being both a power and not the same as mind control or be part of Jareth's personality.