I'm loving it so far. But it's a lot to read so now I've only skimmed through it to take in the rough outline. Will work my way into it slowly.

One thing: I personally like Japan and anything related to it. Thus I'm very likely to play a character in the section of your RP that resembles it. The one thing that bugs me is that the names are an odd mix of very japanese and absolutely not japanese, which (figuratively) makes my ears bleed as someone who knows a lot about feudal Japan.