[quote=Automaton]
I'm gonna sit here with my novel of a bio, I apologyze.
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No it's fine. The character is good. Watch your grammar though. There's enough mistakes there that it set off my alarm bells but the writing is good so I'm guessing you were just excited or in a rush when you worked it out. The only issues are minor and one is my fault. I edited the skills section since you made the character. You now get six skills instead of five and you need to specify the environment for your survival skill for example survival (subterranean) or survival (forest). The biggest issue is time. The last golems were forged not long after THE FIRST BLIGHT. That is a long long long time ago and I do not get the sense of that many centuries passing in your background. Seems like a few decades at most. The easy way to solve this is to just increase the amount of time he was frozen in the forest, but you might have to do some research on the elves of that time. I don't even think the Dalish were around back then as it was before the exalted marches. I might be wrong. Regardless you'll need to brush up on your history for this particular character.