Whoo! An archer, and an elf at that. Talk about filling the unclaimed niche. :D

I think it’s pretty neat how his family immigrated to Cyrodiil, given the political climate between the Empire and the Dominion, even before the Great War. I’m curious as to why his parents chose to displace to Cyrodiil.

His career with the Legion’s actually pretty awesome, and I can see it play out very well within my head; this is a man who brings a lot of experience to the table. I can also see Soul’s influence with the Wayrest pirates; they’re kind of his jam. ;D Also, very nice incorporating the events of the last game’s timeline into the backstory. I love to see when that happens, especially when the character suffered from the enthrallment. And to think he was so close to the original party!

And holy shit, over 90 years of service. You’d think the guy would have had enough experience to be a general. 

Also, his sudden transition to being a thief seems kind of tacked on. For almost his entire life, he’s lived straight and narrow and served honourably in the Legion. Having him quit with a sudden desire to steal from people for a living and to pick up the skills to do so seems kind of like a drastic and unexplained character shift. There’s no reason he couldn’t have picked up thieving related skills as a scout in the Legion- doubtless there’s gates, chests of intel, and so on that would have needed a deft hand to get into. 

Also, what drove him to want to fight the dwemer? It doesn’t seem like his fight, unless it’s about the threat to his homeland. Might want to expand on that a bit. 

Other than that, looks pretty good!