Hmmm. . . I just looked the post over and I think we had a slight miss communication. In my post Amano literally wrote everything [b]as[/b] Illiendi dictated it. Unless you're saying that Illiendi was walking around the room as he dictated, but if that's the case I need to change that part about the demon standing right next to the kid. . . . .Which I can do, but it will mean the line there about getting stuff done will have to be altered and the passion may not come across as well. . . . .Whichever you prefer.