For Ryu. 

The 1/10th of your age for Reputation is rounded down to the nearest whole number, so essentially every 10 years equals +1 Reputation. 

What Profession do you want? You just said Profession... 

What type of Armor are you selecting? (Chain, Leather, Scale, Plate, Padded, Quilted, etc) (I am guessing Leather since it is the type you have?) (Also there is Soft Leather/Hide Armor (as they are the same) and Hard/Studded Leather (like a Hard Leather Jerkin/Curiass), so which kind?) (Hard Leather gives more protection, but has a higher Armor Penalty).

Also if your Apt is one... your chara will be pretty dumb... but that's fine, not everyone in this era is all that smart anyway (that goes for most fantasy RPGs. Of course, you will be able to speak coherently of course, but you won't be able to read (not everyone can read in this world anyway)) You have to have an Apt of 4 to be able to read automatically. You can attempt to read with a Linguistics Roll, but other than that you can't really read naturally. I kind of like it this way. 

Also you do not have enough money for a Master Crafted Rapier. You could take the Heirloom Trait if you wanted to in order to get one for free... 

Also, your flaws. 

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Obsession (+1 XP): You are deeply obsessed at a minor level with finding clues about your parents. You often speak about finding them or actively try to seek out the clues you are somewhat obsessed with. If you fail to do so every few days then you fall into a mild malaise and suffer -1 to Willpower until you satiate your obsession by either speaking of it or trying to seek it out. If you are ever presented with attempts to seek this you must make a DL 15 Concentration Roll to try and resist going after this attempt (if you want to resist)

Jaded (+1 XP): Due to your desire of getting stronger and not really interacting with others you are pretty jaded to other people. You suffer a -1 to all Negotiation and Performance Rolls. 

Unique Madness (+3 XP): You are stricken with a strange madness that causes you to hear voices or thoughts in your head. You must make a DL 15 Concentration Roll to resist these voices or otherwise you will fall into a crazed state of madness, getting a -5 to all Rolls for the next few 'Rounds' until you calm down or stave back your madness. 

+5 XP
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