@LowKey123: Could you move the picture into a hider and put it under an appearance section? I know it seems a little nitpicky, but I'd like to keep everything condensed. Also, you'll need to state what city Jacenta resides in. If you meant that she lives in Quebec City, you'll have to specify that (Quebec City, Quebec, Canada).

@Grey Star: Everything looks okay to me. Accepted.

@Espi and Plightz: The following sentence will seem like "well duh", you'll need to put United States of America or some variation thereof after the state in the Location section. I'd just like to keep things like that standardized.