Terminal--You're in, thanks man Evancat-- I like the idea of an ex Enclave solider. One question--how did he end up in the west? Also, in the future, if you can try to format the paragraphs so there are spaces, that would help us while trying to read it, thanks! Witty-- Here's my only concern. Nightkin are notoriously imbalanced, and I don't think Tenpenny would risk he expedition allowing an unstable Nightkin on his expedition. Can you add something that explains why your Nightkin is stable enough to be a part of the team? Once you have that, I think we're good.