[quote=Mammoth] Should be fun. [/quote] Definitely. I've tweaked the plot a bit this time which will hopefully get us moving onto the main 'reveal' sooner... [quote=AtomicItalian] Hey guys, just a heads up. I'm going to try to get my intro up by tonight/sometime over the weekend, but I'm going up to this hotel/waterpark thing a few hours away on Sunday/Monday, so if I'm inncommunicado, don't take it as disinterest, I'll def be back. I just don't know if I'll get any writing time at the hotel or not. Anyway, glad to see we're getting rolling. [/quote] No worries. There's no rush. If there's one thing I understand is that real life can get busy. So long as there's a decent pace, I don't mind. Waterpark / hotel sounds interesting... is that business or pleasure?