[quote=Instantes] Definitely. I've tweaked the plot a bit this time which will hopefully get us moving onto the main 'reveal' sooner...No worries. There's no rush. If there's one thing I understand is that real life can get busy. So long as there's a decent pace, I don't mind. Waterpark / hotel sounds interesting... is that business or pleasure? [/quote] Pleasure. It's this place called Kalahari in Sandusky, Ohio. It's a big indoor/outdoor waterpark with an attached resort. [img=http://www.ohioathletics.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/kalahari.jpg]