:) That's alright, Lion. There are a few problems with the backstory, though...

1. The Fracturing? There's nothing in there about it at all.

2. Um, I feel bad, shooting down the whole concept like this, but there was never any slavery in our nameless world. Especially not [i]before[/i] the Fracturing. At least, I don't feel comfortable about it. Waiting until Noel posts her thoughts will probably be best.

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Hey, could be worst....could have linked you to homestuck
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-shrug- I probably wouldn't have read it anyway. It rubs me the wrong way.