You seem rushed for some reason. I think it's that you keep apologizing lol You DO know that if you need to back off writing for a while it's cool, right? You have a lot going on, and I'd rather you be doing this because you enjoy it than out of obligation. Plus I know our rp responses are a little longer than some of your others, which means it takes more time and thought...I"m just saying no worries. That's all :) And I hope you still like the rp, I know it's been pretty chill.