Yeah short and sweet sounds good to me. I prefer leaving stuff like personality out of my sheets mainly because I prefer forming my guy as the RP goes on. You can copy the outline of the sheet I had or you can make your own version, whatever works for you ^^

[B]Name:[/B] Dylan Erickson
[B]Age:[/B] 21
[B]Appearance:[/B] [IMG]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs10/i/2006/112/4/0/Can_i_help_you__by_oranjisama.jpg[/IMG]
[B]Other:[/B] He has just recently moved to China in hopes of influencing his works as an author. He loves oriental food and is actually an incredible chef. While he has a horrible sense of cleanliness, his attention to detail is spot-on. He also owns an Old English Sheepdog named "Maxwell" and lives in a small 1 bedroom apartment in downtown Hong Kong.