[quote=whizzball1]
Nope. In fact, everything I wrote stemmed from a few sentences thought up in my mind, including one about the resistance. Against what? For what cause? That's left for the reader.
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I don't like ends open to interpretation. It feels lazy to me, in most cases. Although I wasn't really left trying to figure anything out in the story, likely because you wrote it in fifteen minutes.