[center][b]Advanced Roleplay[/b]
Strict, highly moderated roleplay with elevated standards. Advanced RP focuses on longer posts that include character development and coherent writing ability.
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Since GM is on vacation, I'm going to throw in my two cents for Princess Fuego Pantalones. 

First of all, somebody has been watching way to much paranormal activity, but that's just me being an elitist I guess.

I actually just have a couple questions, maybe to clear it up just for my own personal benefit.

#1: Is she a demon? It's not specifically stated what she shifts into, My money is on Demon.
#2: Magic comes back to the world January 1st, 2016 (Ignoring the Bruja and her mystical sense to know that in 18 years Princess fuego would become devil incarnate)
 The Roleplay begins exactly one month afterwards, February 1st, 2016.
 -- So this means in the span of a month she... Burned down a highschool, Murdered a nurse, and escaped Texas while avoiding the entirety of the media and the police force, and somehow supports herself in New York 
#3: Her powers include.. (quote) "..she felt that she was stronger and faster.." , Anything Fire (I'm assuming already present physical flames, like a camp fire) Pyrokinesis, which is the ability to will fire into existence, Fire bending (The ability to bend the fire to your will, despite willing it into existence anyways through pyrokinesis.), etc (??). Use fire to heal her wounds (does she absorb it like some sort of elemental?) and cure herself of illness. (It's a pretty epic skill alone to control fire on the atomic level and destroy multiple cells of bacteria, virus, etc)

Synopsis: It feels like you watched Paranormal V: The Marked Ones, and thought up a neat idea for a character, then proceeded to smash through and rush the biography leaving it meatless, and chalked full of amusing errors. ("..She wants to find them old".. is my favorite) Then thought of the best way for your character to outshine and surpass everybody else because she can control fire, will it into existence, heal wounds and illness, so basically when she bursts into fire she's invulnerable. 

Advice: Re-write it, Elaborate on Key-points, read some others for positive reinforcement.

Admittedly I tend to rush as well, but not development wise. I type around 116 words per minute, I make mistakes too and I don't catch them, but it's the detail and effort you put into it that makes it good.

*****The above points are personal opinion and in no way, shape, or form represent the collective views of other members, or the GM himself*****

P.S:: There are way too many pictures in your signature. If you haven't noticed, most people tend to use one.

EDIT: Atleast he changed his signature?