[quote=Pasta Sentient] Sounds like a lot of fun. I've typically only played Canon characters in the past, but I've some experience with OC's as in this one. Been ages since I did a Naruto RP though. I got my first introduction to Roleplay in EVE Online and then SWTOR, but slowly moved my way to forum RP because of the freedom it provided. So here I am today. Currently trying out a Nation RP for the first time as Great Britain in the Word in Revolution over in the Nation Section. Also a Tim Drake in an alternate Young Justice setting. So I love this kinda stuff. I'm really looking forward to seeing Haruka and Ryuu interact. They are both swordsmen/women but their styles seem to be entirely different. Seeing Haruka's pictures you got made my IRL muscles feel inept. :P Haha. Anyways, really looking forward to more joining us and seeing how this plays out. [/quote] I started out doing Live Roleplaying when I was just a kid, moved on to Pen and Paper in my tween years and started playing Post by Post when I was fifteen. I don't think I've ever MMORPG-ed. I've played plenty of MMORPGs (and I'm always looking for the one that I won't get bored of within a few weeks), but I've actually never even cosidered actually roleplaying in one. I find Nation RPs confusing. I've tried a few (try everything once, you know?), but it wasn't my thing. I've done plenty of Marvel based RPs, though (not much for DC, gotta say). They actually have a lot in common. With the swords, the gates, the outsider dads and the whole "I need to be better, faster, stronger" no matter the cost -thing. Haruka was always loved and taken care of, though, where Ryuu childhood was not... ideal. Ryuu was a genius, thouhg, while Haruka was the runt of her class. Is a beautiful symbolism, really. Haruka's physical strenght was actually originally designed for the purpose of pushing the limits between male and female roles. We see lots of superhero women with super-strength, but they're always lean and curvaceous, anyways. We almost never see big, bulging muscle-mass on women (She-Hulk, though). She was originally a bit chubby, too. The missing tooth, as I just added to her CS, was something of the sort as well. Missing front teeth is seen as juvenile and/or downright ugly. ... Her hair, long and in a "feminine" color, was actually burned in the original story, so it would up all short and scorched, resulting in her keeping it short. I actually had another character, who was the direct opposite of her, in the same roleplay. A Hyuuga, with their graceful movements and slender bodies. She had really long, silky, extremely feminine hair, wore traditionally feminine clothing and even had her nails done. She was weak as fuck and ended up a crippled medic... I actually do a whole lot of pushing the limit when it comes to my characters. Such as this guy. Who is a guy. A straight guy, even. [hider=Kiyoshi, or Kin for short] [img=http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t291/o0love0o14/P0304038.jpg] [/hider] After I got a bit better at drawing, he wound up looking like this, though [hider=Second attempt at Kin] [img=http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t291/o0love0o14/Scan0009.jpg] [/hider] [quote=ChibiYuki] Meh with the effort i sowed here, I might as well reap what i have done here. So, sure I have the Paper Release and make the techniques for it. [/quote] I think I'll wait for you to fix and finish your sheet before I give you any more feedback on it. It's easier when you have the whole thing.