[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/47698/posts/ooc]OOC is up,[/url] feel free to use this thread more if you like for test posting characters.

[quote=BlueAngel]
Would this character be alright, Obviously she isn't the strongest, but she isn't very practiced with her powers.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Name:Riaka (Orphaned)Race:High elf.Age: 80Height:6'3"Title:Blood mageAlighnment:Chaotic good. Backstory: Having a alignment to blood magic is usually shunned, and as such Riaka was abandoned at birth. She was lucky enough to be adopted by humans unable to sense her powers. Though they became very apparent later in life. Raika was pretty obviously shunned, but being adopted by the clergy she believed she had a higher calling still. She made it her goal to use her less then humane powers to protect those around her threw whatever means necessary. She has recently left the clergy to aid people in need, despite her lack of non destructive magic she seems to find ways. Possessions: nothing but her cloths, and her stave currently. Special traits: Drain- She naturally drains blood from nearby sources, using it to heal wounds, and restore her own subconciously. This is increased if it was caused by one of her own spells, or she touches the blood.Spells: Blood spike style 1:Blood spikes shoots small needles of blood from her hand to attack someone. Transfusion style 1: Uses some of her own blood(which she usually has a excess of to heal a wound, and you know give a little extra blood. Fever type 1: Uses blood to make someone stronger, sharper, and quicker. This effect only last a couple minutes, and can be incredibly effective. It may start using some of the targets blood pretty heavily if they let the fever control them. (It just feels really good for anyone who has it.)
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The personality progression of the character doesn't make sense, honestly- "ORPHANED! SHUNNED! SHUNNED AGAIN! Adopted by priests who mysteriously can't pick up on her abilities! Time to go and help people!" Just... not really getting the logic behind that. If she was going to believe in signs of having a purpose, I would picture that she'd look at the powers she was born to wield over the priests who are apparently so inept that for all their mysticism can't pick up on the abilities of a child.