[quote=Primal Conundrum] feel free to use this thread more if you like for test posting characters.The personality progression of the character doesn't make sense, honestly- "ORPHANED! SHUNNED! SHUNNED AGAIN! Adopted by priests who mysteriously can't pick up on her abilities! Time to go and help people!" Just... not really getting the logic behind that. If she was going to believe in signs of having a purpose, I would picture that she'd look at the powers she was born to wield over the priests who are apparently so inept that for all their mysticism can't pick up on the abilities of a child. [/quote] She was adopted by a clergy..... hence she has better morals then the average person. IT was supposed to be found by a human scout, not adopted...... That's where a lot of poor wording in the original sorry, Rewrote it.