[quote=BlueAngel]
Rewrote it some.BTW.The term chaotic may actually be a big problem here. A lot of people use it stupidly, and it comes down to some no meaning alignmentA true chaotic character is prone to being spontaneous, not following authority well, and openly murders based on there morality ect....She has a strong addiction to combat, and open wounds. Meaning healing/combat is almost addictive to her. Being helpful is not always lols i heal you. Being helpful to her is being a mercenary/slayer(beast).
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Better I suppose. I'll allow it, but please try to keep an eye on your spelling- you misspelled the character's name at least once, and some of the sentences are fairly awkwardly worded. Just... keep an eye on it, if it gets too distracting I'll try to help you with it.

[quote=camillethegnome]
Hi! I'm incredibly new here, but I'm really interested in this RP. I might just end up lurking and reading as you guys go along since I don't think I'd be able to write anything coherent enough to keep up. Unless of course, you'd be relatively forgiving if I go with simple characteristics. I'm not too familiar with the specifics of other races so I'd probably be human. Similarly, I don't know much about combat styles or weaponry so I'd succumb to my natural tendency toward magic types. If anything at all. Would it be completely unproductive to have a completely useless character just along for the ride? Blank slate. I suppose considering the setting it would be highly unlikely to find a person who is not capable of defending themselves. I'll keep reading around more.
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I like magic, the more scientific it is (by that I mean how classified and systematic the explanations for how it works are) the better! If you'd like help coming up with a character idea that will fit, I'd be happy to help, and from that small sample your writing seems decent. If you're interested in playing some sort of spellcaster as you say, then you're welcome to join!