@GuySenpai: Please describe "elemental magic" a bit more. Keep in mind that I have forbidden the use of multiple elements, so try to specify a particular kind of magic that you would like to use. Other than that, it looks good.

@lin101: I'll need some more detail in a few areas. With the character's description, describe her clothing a bit. Maybe her posture as she walks, or what demeanor she appears to have. Try to create a nice image of your character. Elaborate on the history a bit. What was her family's old life? Clearly, they are a new family here, so how did she build up a reputation that would get her into the Guardians? Also, as of now there is not much suffering in Kado village and beast attacks have been pretty scarce. The village is currently at peace, which is why people end up staying there, so consider that in your history. Finally, I need you to describe the Marrow tree more. Where is it located in relation to the village, what kind of great mortals were buried there and how does anyone know this, and what does the tree look like?

@Parser: What exactly does channeling qi entail? Are we talking minor physical enhancements, or full-on energy blasts? Also elaborate on how he established his brewery in a place where alcohol is a scarce luxury, and how separating himself from the rest of the village (and seemingly not contributing anything since his youth) has effected his reputation. He's a martial arts master, so was he a guardian in his youth? Does he share his booze? Lastly, give a detailed description of Ku Fan's still to create a nice picture for the other players.