Sovi3t

Your sheet presently has many flaws.
First, I require names for your leaders beyond aliases. Just because someone is known primarily by an alias does not mean they do not have a name. Since the material on the sheet is not common knowledge to other players, there is no excuse to not include names.

Secondly, specifics. Fighters are expensive craft in their own right, and powerful when used correctly. I need numbers for them. I also need numbers for any space stations and depots on Omega or planetside, saying you have 'many' of them is unacceptable. Remember, this is an environment in which players will battle other players, and anywhere this occurs, specificity is absolutely required.

Thirdly, your history. While it could potentially make for an interesting read to view alliance (or other outside forces) records on an organisation, it entirely defeats the purpose of the history section. That section is to give me a good indication of the genesis and goals of the organisation from a largely impartial standpoint, as well as an audition for your knowledge of the setting and writing skills. All this section has told me is that they like to avoid the Alliance.

Fourthly, mail?
You know there is a Galaxy spanning Extranet right? And that email is standard, especially since most people have either an omni-tool or easy access to an extranet service...
If parcels need to be sent there are plenty of legit cargo shipping companies that would include that as part of their basic service. I simply don't see the need for such a thing in the Mass Effect universe.

Finally, the carrier cannot be old and found. Carriers have not been around long enough for that. Carriers were invented by humans when they arrived in the galactic community thirty years ago, in that time the other races rushed to develop them and build them. They are a fairly rare ship type and too few have been lost or decomissioned to have one left just floating about space for someone to find. I may be allowing you a carrier, but you'll need a better reason than that for why you have it.